Monday, September 29, 2014

My Fantasy Fiction

It was her first time babysitting, but she had brought everything she could possibly need, so she was sure nothing could go wrong. But she didn’t know what lay in front of her. She went to her neighbor’s house and ringed the doorbell, her neighbor answered the door. She said that she will be back soon, and left her 2 year old daughter Jade with Amber the babysitter. Amber and Jade were happy because they both knew each other, and Amber loved Jade, she thought Jade was the cutest little girl ever. It was almost Jade’s bedtime but she wanted to stay up late with Amber, Amber said no maybe next  time, and took her to bed. Jade didn’t want to sleep, so Amber read her a storybook- jack and the beanstalk, one of Jade’s favorite. Jade soon fell asleep, and Amber went into the living room, to watch T.V and eat apple pie, her favorite until her neighbor came back. Someone soon knocked on the door and Amber answered. It wasn’t the neighbor, it was a girl named Jenna. She had a huge stick in her hand and she hit Amber in the back of her head. Amber fell down. Her neighbor soon arrived, and saw Amber lying on the ground, she tried to wake her up, but Amber was too unconscious to answer. Her neighbor quickly dressed up Jade and asked Amber’s dad to babysit her. Amber’s mom and her neighbor, rushed to the hospital and the doctor told them that Amber will be fine. They took her inside and in about 20-30 minutes, the doctor came out and told them that Amber is fine, but unfortunately, she has lost her memory. Amber’s family tried their best to help. memory back, and even the smell of apple pie couldn’t bring her memory back.




4 comments:

  1. Nice story.. is this the first part of a big story? What will happen to Amber? Will she get her memory back?

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    1. No, this is the whole story, whatever happens to Amber is your own imagination.
      dun - dun - dun.

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  2. Interesting, keep it up! still scope of making it big. Your nanu, myself, we all wanted to start writing sometime but never started. You have talent and you should never stop now. God bless

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